Need your ears for this track - Thx

A&Q about 350Z
Q:

Something I've chucked together - Cant decide if to carry or or binit ?
slow track using the Cassie - Long way 2 go RNB samples with a few other things thrown in - Drums/Vocals etc only 2 mins long just undecided, listening to it it appears a bit flat to me but would like ya ears and comments pls

A:

IMO, as it is at the moment, yeah it is a bit flat, cant judge it really as its not finished
i quite like the progressinve stuff, but the part you have so far is the progressive bit, so you need to add more to it and mix it up a bit
when its finished and mixed up, it will be very good i think
A:

I reckon it sounds pretty good mate. My only advice is to get rid of the samples (the overuse of vocal samples is a real bugbear of mine), or at least use just one.
I agree with Tony - it just needs more! Maybe add a few more breaks in there. There seems to be too many bars of the same melody also - maybe alter the melody on the 4th bar?
I like it though!
A:

needs some more hoovers and horns!
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